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Wednesday 24 February 2010

today childishly: to play

face- face a window. faced pulling a
a- a face. a window face. this is a pulling
window- window face a pulling. this laced
pulling and laced under a- a face this a
pulling and pulling under a- a laced faced this

a- a
face- face

1 comment:

Ryan Ormonde said...

my reading:

this is the sound of FOUND!

this is a rhythm that ends in the sound of FOUND! each time. I hear this sound:

title:
"today childishly: to PLAY"

line 1:
face- face a WINDOW. faced pulling a

line 2:
a- a FACE. a WINdow FACE. this is a pulling

line 4:
pulling and laced under a- a FACE this a

line 5:
pulling and pulling under a- a LACED FACE this

then there is a space
then the next two lines are SEE-SAWS

they are not sea sores

they are see saw

the sound of FOUND! is an upward inflection, a raising in pitch

the sound of SEE-SAW is the same but can be repeated like this:

a-A
A-a
a-A
A-a

face-FACE
FACE-face
face-FACE
FACE-face

there were also SEE-SAW before

WINdow face
window FACE
WINdow face
window FACE

LACED face
laced FACE
LACED face
laced FACE

this certainly reminds me of Gertrude Stein's interest in Children's word games, her alphabet book period

the
a- a face
is a new sound
a new FOUND! sound

of a new you
of a you new