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Tuesday 26 May 2009

Domesticity

I know I should be here more and I will. I have been working on NON FREE writing.
A series of domestic sonnets looking at "performing" domestic acts. Currently experimenting
with baking. Baking: writing through baking. Baking: performing baking. Baking: baking
This series will look at how physical performed processes degrades language.

BAKING I

She, stands still over wood to hand clean skin,
She, opens tears butter grams to pale whip,
Not quick, but thick sealing moisture out. Been
Handed knife in warm melting spread by lip,
Into dense siv fingers into plain fleur,
Sifted, mix hand over wrist pale motion,
Turn heat, beat hard, with wood, melting in beurre,
In mould, beat burns, pinch lick through emotion,
I, open woman, tend bake to tap pours,
Knife plunge to put Ceres beating of warm,
She waits in domestic wire blending hours,
Now cooling, but she will wait and reform,
She: A domestic leads with her own knife.
She: A domestic leads as her own wife.

This making and baking and producing in a defined form was strenuous!
While the oven baked I translated:

BAKING Ia

It, is held quiet above it wood to give the clean skin,
It, opens grams of butter of tears to fade the whip,
Pas quickly, but thick moisture of sealing outside. Given
The knife in the hot cast iron draw aside by the lip,
In the dense fingers of SIV in the flower dish,
Tamisé, the mixture give the pale movement of wrist,
Tournez heat, beat hard, with wood, melting in butter,
In the mould, of the burns of beat, pinching lick by l' emotion,
I, open the woman, tend make cook with the furnace to type pours,
The dive of knife to put Ceres the beat of heat,
It waits in hours of mixture of domestic wire,
Maintaining cooling, but it will wait and reform,
It: Domestic wire with its own knife.
It: Domestic wire as a its own wife.

BAKING Ib

Own is kept calm over the wood in order to replace the skin,
It, opens grams of butter of tears in order to wither the whip,
Not quickly, but thick humidity sealing outside. Replaced
The knife in the discarded warm cast iron from the lips,
In the dense fingers of SIV in the flat flower,
Leaked, the concoction replaces the movement wrist pale,
Turns the heat, hard heartbeat, with wood, flow in the butter,
In the stamp, of the skin burns of heartbeat, pinching consume for l' emotion,
I, open the woman, stretch make to cook to the furnace in order to type pour,
L' immersion of knife to put Ceres the heat heartbeat,
Waits for in hours of concoction of domestic thread,
That it maintains the cooling, but will wait for and reform,
It: Domestic sons with its knife.
It: Domestic sons like its spouse.

BAKING Ic

Oneself in order to substitute is maintained the skin which is calm in the wood product,
It, in order to do to make wither the whip opens the gram of the butter of a tear,
In the humidity sealing outside which quickly, is thick but.
The knife which is to the iron which is warm comes to throw away lip which substitutes,
From the finger which SIV where there is to a flower which is flat is dense,
The new, mixture substitutes the kinetic wrist which is pale,
The tree and to join in, the line, hard pulsation the interchange, is to the butter goes round,
From the stamp of the skin burn of the pulsation which pinches, consume; Emotion,
I in order the hitter stroke in order to cook, makes woman the stretch and follows, Opens;
Puts flooding of the knife which is a thing opens pulsation Ceres,
From time of domestic disappointment mixture the period expectation,
It to maintain cooling, but reform will wait,
It: The domestic son who has it knife.
It: The domestic son likes it spouse.

BAKING Id

To replace to do that skin maintained which of wood produces calmly is,
Him, to form, the whip to fade opens however the gram butter d' a tear,
In l' outside d' moisture which is fast, strong.
The knife is which to the iron which is hot, comes to throw far from the lip replacement,
Of the finger, the SIV, in him with a flower gives, is flat, narrow is,
The new one, mixture replaces the kinetic wrist which plates is,
Tree and with ‘interior to connect, the line, will palpitate lasts exchange which butter is,
With interior, of the stamp of fire skin to palpitate which wedges; the respect uses;
Feeling to cook I for the account, the woman and expansion form I opinion d' man d' impact
Follow; One s' open; flood of the measurer a thing opens to palpitate of cerium is,
Of the time to which a national mixture of disappointment l' makes an attempt period,
They wait however to maintain cooling, improvement, places to
Him: The national son who l' has measuring.
He: The national son wants it husband.

BAKING I BAKED: